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Young left Jeanne's embrace to break up with her, receiving news that his friend had a date with a man she had loved for 10 years. Seongmodo, a retired soldier, was completely drunk at the beach. Instead of showing concern and apologizing for his love, Donggyu stood near Jeanne, allowing her to be seen by him.

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Young decided to end his relationship with Jeanne, as he learned that his friend had finally arranged a date with the man she had been in love with for a decade. Meanwhile, Seongmodo, a retired soldier, was heavily intoxicated at the beautiful beach. Rather than expressing his concern and apologizing for his actions, Donggyu stood close to Jeanne, unintentionally allowing her to be noticed by Seongmodo.